~*~The Windy City Flyer | The Saga of Devin Hester ~*~

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  • T.Dot
    A Real RockNRolla
    • Nov 2008
    • 6868

    #61
    Updates tonight if my laptop stops being a bitch ass

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    • T.Dot
      A Real RockNRolla
      • Nov 2008
      • 6868

      #62


      Season 1, Episode 9: Always a Bear

      August 8,2008

      The scene opens with Devin Hester sitting at a short wickware table situated in the foyer of his apartment in Chicago. He holds his cell phone in his left hand and his other hand resides in his long locks. Hester appears to be very stressed. He lets out a long sigh and begins to dial a number into his sleak iPhone.

      Voice: Hello?

      Devin Hester: *Hester pauses a minute before speaking* Mr Angelo?

      Jerry Angelo: Hester? What the fuck do you want?

      Devin Hester: Sir I *pauses* I'm so sorry. For everything.

      Jerry Angelo: *sighs* Sorry? SORRY!? Hester are you fucking kidding me? You embrassed our organization and betrayed the fans. Sorry does not fucking cut it. *hangs up phone*

      Devin Hster: *long sigh* I-


      --------------------------------------------------------------

      The next day in Peoria the Bears are working hard in practice. It is 89 degrees outside and the players feel the heat but do not give up for fear of being cut.

      Bob Babich: *yelling while patrolling the field* Come on! Do you think every team is as shitty as Kay Cee? No! Keep it up!

      The players continue their warmups with the coaches stalking through their ranks when out of the tunnel comes Devin Hester, clad in pads and an old Miami practice jersey. No one takes notice until Dante Hall stops doing jumping jacks.

      Dante Hall: Well, look what the Bear dragged in.

      The coaches, including Lovie Smith, turn around and set eyes on Hester. Smith instantly is infuriated and storms over to the player, throwing his clip board to the turf in the process.

      Lovie Smith: Hester? Get the fuck out of here. You ain't a Bear anymore.*Hester stays silent so Smith grabs his facemask and pulls it towards the coaches angry face* I said "You ain't a Bear anymore." Now leave.

      Devin Hester: *frees Smith's grip and looks down* Coach, I-

      Lovie Smith: *beckons to recievers coach Darryl Drake* Drake, call security.

      Devin Hester: *turns around and speaks over his shoulder* I'll leave but I want ya'll to remember I'm always a Bear. Ain't nothing can change that.
      Last edited by T.Dot; 01-22-2009, 03:54 PM.

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      • MRN
        MRNeverwearthesamething
        • Nov 2008
        • 4271

        #63
        Officially gay.

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        • T.Dot
          A Real RockNRolla
          • Nov 2008
          • 6868

          #64
          Originally posted by MRN
          Officially gay.
          Leave then.
          You don't apperciate what kind of setting and tone I'm trying to create.
          It only gets better, I have the whole story planned out.
          Last edited by T.Dot; 01-22-2009, 07:20 PM.

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          • packersfan4eva
            Ryan Luxem
            • Dec 2008
            • 9052

            #65
            make him go the packers so he can kill the bears. 1, cuz i h8 the bears. 2, it'll make the bears feel extremely bad and they'll apologize and stuff

            Originally posted by Miggyfan99
            I would get fucked in the ass for WS tickets too... only if Miguel was playing though

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            • T.Dot
              A Real RockNRolla
              • Nov 2008
              • 6868

              #66
              Originally posted by Chad0034
              c'mon man.... how unrealistic can you geT?
              LOL, you'll see ;)
              Originally posted by eric7064
              lol this is dumb.... we in blitz the lg or the NFL.... i once again doubt Angelo does that in real life..... and i know fer sure smith dont get that mad hes just as calm as T.dungy..... i feel like im readin a soap opera
              LOL, tough Chicago crowd eh?
              Please keep following it will smooth over.
              I'm calm in real life to but when i get mad I swear, I'm sure Lovie is like that.
              As for Angelo his character is completely made up but it's only 9 episodes in so things could change ;)
              Originally posted by Saints101
              I would have to say take him to the Saints!!!
              Originally posted by packersfan4eva
              make him go the packers so he can kill the bears. 1, cuz i h8 the bears. 2, it'll make the bears feel extremely bad and they'll apologize and stuff
              LOL, as I said you'll see ;)

              KK
              I want to clear something up.
              This will not be like all the other player chises where they just report on the teams game and maybe a little focus on the player now and then.
              I want a full in depth look into this situation.
              I really think this could turn out amzing but ya'll need to have patience, I'm setting up the story.
              Sure some characters may seem unrealsitic but since no one in here has most likely met them and since I am not a Bears fan at all, I'm taking a shot in the dark as to their personalities.

              Hester- immature, smug on outside, passionate on the inside
              Angelo- doesnt like to be overruled and shown up, wants to be a leader, doesnt take shit

              Smith- Calm most times, feels great compatriotship to his team

              Please no more negative comments like MRN's.
              If you don't like, don't read simple as that.
              I really think this has potential but I need ya'll to beat with me.

              Thanks

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              • MRN
                MRNeverwearthesamething
                • Nov 2008
                • 4271

                #67
                Originally posted by T.Dot
                LOL, you'll see ;)


                LOL, tough Chicago crowd eh?
                Please keep following it will smooth over.
                I'm calm in real life to but when i get mad I swear, I'm sure Lovie is like that.
                As for Angelo his character is completely made up but it's only 9 episodes in so things could change ;)




                LOL, as I said you'll see ;)

                KK
                I want to clear something up.
                This will not be like all the other player chises where they just report on the teams game and maybe a little focus on the player now and then.
                I want a full in depth look into this situation.
                I really think this could turn out amzing but ya'll need to have patience, I'm setting up the story.
                Sure some characters may seem unrealsitic but since no one in here has most likely met them and since I am not a Bears fan at all, I'm taking a shot in the dark as to their personalities.

                Hester- immature, smug on outside, passionate on the inside
                Angelo- doesnt like to be overruled and shown up, wants to be a leader, doesnt take shit

                Smith- Calm most times, feels great compatriotship to his team

                Please no more negative comments like MRN's.
                If you don't like, don't read simple as that.
                I really think this has potential but I need ya'll to beat with me.

                Thanks
                I am sorry, I just don't like shit like people who make other people out to be major dicks...

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                • T.Dot
                  A Real RockNRolla
                  • Nov 2008
                  • 6868

                  #68
                  Originally posted by MRN
                  I am sorry, I just don't like shit like people who make other people out to be major dicks...
                  Follow if you want, doesn't matter to me.
                  All I'm going to say is that all the characters will develop and mature throughout this 'chise.

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                  • T.Dot
                    A Real RockNRolla
                    • Nov 2008
                    • 6868

                    #69
                    Some updates this weekend
                    By some I mean one ;)

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                    • ZAN
                      ZAN
                      • Oct 2008
                      • 1463

                      #70
                      Sorry to say, but I honestly agree with MRN.

                      This is a freaking soap opera. No one cares whether or not Devin Hester eats Chicken Pad Thai for dinner....

                      You make Hester look like a total douche, which he definitely isn't. He's as humble as it gets.

                      You make Jerry Angelo look like a hardass. When IRL he's the biggest sissy kissass in the world.

                      Lovie Smith is just about as impressionable as it gets....

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                      • T.Dot
                        A Real RockNRolla
                        • Nov 2008
                        • 6868

                        #71
                        Originally posted by jayroddog6
                        Haters. This is really good, Mitch. Even though your a gigantic bitch sometimes this has a lot going for you. I'm in it for the long haul. ;)
                        Originally posted by Saints101
                        Nice. I'm going to keep reading & posting because this is really good. And like he said all y'all that don't like don't read.
                        I mean you can't make him change Devin's personality just because a coupl of y'all are bitching about.
                        And all y'all out there bitching just shut the fuck up!
                        Thanks a lot guys

                        Originally posted by ZAN71789
                        Sorry to say, but I honestly agree with MRN.

                        This is a freaking soap opera. No one cares whether or not Devin Hester eats Chicken Pad Thai for dinner....

                        You make Hester look like a total douche, which he definitely isn't. He's as humble as it gets.

                        You make Jerry Angelo look like a hardass. When IRL he's the biggest sissy kissass in the world.

                        Lovie Smith is just about as impressionable as it gets....
                        Soap Opera?
                        I'm tired of having player chises be regular chises with little focus on the player.
                        I wanted to actually have an out of football storyline to make up for my lack of pictures in game recaps etc.
                        I want this to be fun to read.
                        The chise is nine updates in, these characters haven't even scratched the surface of their personalities.

                        I know this is a highly conterversial 'chise but I am going to keep this going.
                        If you don't like it, don't read. Simple.
                        Thank you to all my followers and thanks to all the people that gave this a chance, love it or hate it

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                        • ZAN
                          ZAN
                          • Oct 2008
                          • 1463

                          #72
                          You're 9 updates in, one pre-season game in, and about 500 Devin Hester "Who the f*ck is this n*gga?!" in....

                          If I wanted that, I'd just go listen to BET/MTV.

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                          • T.Dot
                            A Real RockNRolla
                            • Nov 2008
                            • 6868

                            #73
                            Originally posted by ZAN71789
                            You're 9 updates in, one pre-season game in, and about 500 Devin Hester "Who the f*ck is this n*gga?!" in....

                            If I wanted that, I'd just go listen to BET/MTV.
                            Then leave.
                            Simple.
                            I will not quit this.
                            Continue to follow or don't ; just shut up with the negative comments

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                            • T.Dot
                              A Real RockNRolla
                              • Nov 2008
                              • 6868

                              #74
                              No updates this weekend.

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                              • T.Dot
                                A Real RockNRolla
                                • Nov 2008
                                • 6868

                                #75
                                Perhaps an update tonight

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